DC Reboot Rewrite! Let's Rewrite Batman and Robin #1!

OK, so I already rewrote a page of Green Lantern Corps. Now I've decided to help out DC by rewriting a page of Batman and Robin #1. Confused about the relationship between Batman and his son? Don't worry! I have you covered, with my original new dialogue! This is how my version would have gone down!...

If you have a comics page that you think I should rewrite send it to me at contact@fruitlesspursuits, or link it to me in the comments section!